All Comments on 'My Private Orgy'

by saiboater

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justbilljustbillover 19 years ago
EXCELLANT

An excellant story. About the sailboat, That's my BIGGIE. I just won't ever get there. I hope you get yours.

ejusticeejusticeover 19 years ago
Intense Lusty Story

The development of this story took some time, but it was worth every word. I hope you are working on the sequel, I can hardly wait.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Very, very, very hot

Great story, great setting, even better sex. Wow!! Please write more soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Outstanding!

Great Story! the best I've read in ages. I'd love to see more!

flabadboyflabadboyover 19 years ago
Excellent

Saiboater, great story. It is always nice to read stories that are really hot and that also contains correct spelling and grammar.

I also like the way you gave us some insight into the characters before getting into the sex. And I loved the way you slowly warmed it up before getting there.

Do more please!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Hero is a jerk.

Sorry, but the guy in this "story" is way too full of himself. Badgers the understandably cautious woman and she jumps into sexy banter with him after he practically stalks her? Very believable! Not.

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