All Comments on 'My Roman Soldier Ch. 01'

great beginning but your opening sentence just gave me the giggles!!!!

Nice beginning, especially given that there were no Roman soldiers in sight within this (rather short) chapter. Lots of potential, here, but this chapter wasn't particularly entertaining.

-- KK in Texas

An intriguing start. I'm very curious as to how it will progress and how she will respond to Dag's concealed cruelty. Moreover it's a pleasant change to be reading a story that is set in Britain rather than America (which the vast majority seem to be). I hope you will keep it up since I'm hooked!

And then all of these nerds will get sandals shoved so far up their ass they cough laces, and not in a sexual way, and bothering about being angry at Al won't be a priority! Poor Dag, even if he is a sadistic douchebean.

I can already see this not ending well for him. You don't call the viewpoint waifu an ignorant cocktease in a chapter that suggests change is brewing of a story whose title is about, presumably, her leaving you! Silly, genre-unsavvy Celt child. Your genre-unsavviness will end with a hasta up your ass. Not the sexy kind.

Although who knows, maybe the titular (yet clearly Almha's!1!1) nerd is into that.

Or maybe not.

TL;DR:

Dag: you should really marry me u unsavvy cocktease cmere let me fondle the boobs

Almha: *waifu do a run away!* uwa he's being rude

^'s kinky, exotic paramour: *walks in on four-inch platform shoes and twirls a boa* ohhh yes

Dag: the gay is overwhelming im melting i need to do a manly thing quick get me a cow to slaughtauuh no good i've melted

kinky roman: *sheds drag* hello i am a beautiful butterfly newly hatched from a chrysalis of pain and suffering. cure my ills in return for this service i have done thee.

Almha: anything's better than Dag sign me right tf up let's go fLYING