by nofaceinthemirror
Leads in smoothly from first part of story. And sex? Ummm, hmmm! Very, uh, sexy shower scene. Wonder what's next?
This is a nice story. I have enjoyed the first three chapters and look forward to the next.
I just devoured your stories. Simply great. actualy simply is so wrong of a word to use. let me start again. It was a perfectly cut diamond, with so many facets that kept me engadged. You could taste the filth in your story that it had me gagging at times, and fearful. Like a magician who casually tosses a coin in the air, the other side lands up, with such powerful erotic smells that make u just want to dive in, even though u can see the crap on the other side, but dont' care. I know i just touched on two of the facets, and there where others. I hope i get to see more of your diamond. fyi, i dont' think its a diamond it the ruff. but one with great clarity and color.