All Comments on 'My Sexual Awakening'

by OldHippieInOz

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sopharoonessopharoonesabout 10 years ago
nice beginnings

hope to read more fellow aussie! memories are always fun to share!

William smythWilliam smythalmost 10 years ago
Welcome

Your first story rated 5 stars from me even though it was very short.

I'll be looking for more from you--soon I hope.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Great!

Was a great short story on the first time, Thanks so much

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Memories awakened

Oh Yes!! I remember that first feel of a girls hand on my parts and exactly how her pussy felt to me. WONDERFUL.

MORE??

OldHippieInOzOldHippieInOzalmost 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks for positive comments

Thanks everyone for your positive comments, suggestions and great votes. Following your suggestions I have written a longer part 2 which should come on line in a day or so. Hope you enjoy that one too. I certainly enjoyed remembering the events and putting them down in words.

humminbeanhumminbeanalmost 10 years ago
Good start!

Congrats on a very nice first submission. Now, let me offer the criticism that every author wants to hear: It wasn't nearly long enough. There needs to be a lot more of this kind of writing, so get to it - now!

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