All Comments on 'My Sexy Daughter'

Great story loved it. loved the way his daughter played him .

Yeah i thought the same thing about the hot water. Not possible .

I really liked the story though. NICE

In a Marriott hotel??

"Cocky"? Grow up FFS.

The whole thing lacked credibility, was unoriginal and was just a copy of many other similar stories. I think the writer may be less than the 18 years of age minimum required here.

Great build up... passionate love! Thank you...

You really have a wonderful skill when it comes to these types of stories. More please.

Jenni: Great story made me so hard. Is there any more to tell.

Ethan

Excellent story. Good development. Built from nowhere into HOT... keep up the great writing!

Very good story. Had me hard the whole three pages.

Suggestion, however: find a good editor to help you.