All Comments on 'My Sexy Daughter'

Very good story. Had me hard the whole three pages.

Suggestion, however: find a good editor to help you.

Excellent story. Good development. Built from nowhere into HOT... keep up the great writing!

Jenni: Great story made me so hard. Is there any more to tell.

Ethan

You really have a wonderful skill when it comes to these types of stories. More please.

Great build up... passionate love! Thank you...

In a Marriott hotel??

"Cocky"? Grow up FFS.

The whole thing lacked credibility, was unoriginal and was just a copy of many other similar stories. I think the writer may be less than the 18 years of age minimum required here.

Yeah i thought the same thing about the hot water. Not possible .

I really liked the story though. NICE

Great story loved it. loved the way his daughter played him .