All Comments on 'My Sexy Neighbors'

Awful writing. Wooden and unnatural. And many mistakes. Get an editor (or just use a spell checker!)

"all mighty" should be "almighty".

"care full" should be "careful".

"lightening" should be "lightning".

"after noon" should be "afternoon".

"cuddeling" should be "cuddling".

"each others" should be "each other's"

"You mean you're pregnant to?" Try "too".

As for "Suddenly Belinda inhaled my hard cock", well I laughed out loud! Do you know what "inhale" means?

Not your best effort - but ignore the nit picking by the anonymous commentor. While he/she is correct - none of that really affected the understanding of the story.