by Carnevil9
While this installment could've benefited from some additional paragraph breaks, overall it was a solid follow-up to the original endeavor. Strong writing and hot action carried me through, so you get a thumbs-up from me. Keep up the good work.
Great story that could go in many different directions. Like Whitney and Britney bringing home lots of other girls for Andy!
Great story. Really turned me on. Yes, I would like to see the sisters be a part of their brothers conquests. Like they go to his campus and seeing him with two hot girlls would make it easy for him to pick up others. Foursome anyone?
Anyway. lots of potential for future additions.
Do they ever bathe? By the end of Chapter 2, I began to wonder how it must have smelled in their parents bedroom. Kidding aside, it was a fine tale and I do hope there will be more chapters. Those slutty sisters must take it up the ass, don't they?
like 90% of the writers on this site you can't finish a story if you can't finish then don't start this series was good but ended up being a waste of time what a idiot writer
You should keep on writing this story and add in a little drama and stuff
Makes me wish I had a sister. Your use of language made this a sexy and fun story. Keep up the good work.
Fun story, but the highlights were the amazingly unique descriptive story-telling during the (intercourse) sex scenes! So much better than the typical story with repetative, unimaginative descriptions!
Nice story. Pity they didn't shower together it would have added another dimension
But, of course, I never thought of actually interacting with them in a sexual way, since they were my freaking sisters, after all! I didn't even dare to fantasize about them, or think about them when I jerked off during long, lonely nights.
@@@ that is the hugest load of SHIT on the fucking planet!! EVERY brother on the planet jacks off over his hot, cute, even plain sisters. PERIOD. Writing shit like this removes all believability from the story!!! @@@
They would look at me and break into peals of laughter.
@@@ why in the world would they break into laughter? That doesnt make any sense at all. If anything,it would piss me off. @@@
By the time they went away to college, they had huge, sensual breasts, slim graceful waists, and full, carnal hips.
@@@ why do most authors feel the need to write the girls in with huge ass tits?! @@@
This was the only room in the house with a double bed.
@@@ i cant imagine sleeping on a small ass double! @@@
They embraced, and then, to both my horror and amazement, they kissed!
@@@ horror?! What kind of backward retard is this guy? I'd be like "waitaminute! You two bitches have been fooling around for HOW many years and havent included me in on the fun?!? @@@
I could see them pushing a ball of my spooge back and forth
@@@ ...spooge?! Eww. @@@
snowballed the slimy wad of cum back and forth between their sexy mouths
@@@ ...slimy wad of cum?! Really, you need to quit trying to gross us out with stupid descriptions and stick to basics! @@@
As soon as the rim of the head disappeared, I gasped from the sensation. It was as if my entire body was inside her! I had no idea how the pleasure of a few inches of flesh could infuse one's entire being! It was totally incredible.
@@@ it feels nice and everything, but its not all that, lol! I've always hated all the b.s. Buildup that you always heard growing up... I remember after I had sex for the first time, I thought 'thats it? Thats what all the hoopla is about? Its nice and all, but no deities are popping out of the woodwork, lol.' @@@
"I haven't deflowered a boy for months," Britney was saying. "It's always nice to give something back to the community."
"What about that freshman at that party last week?" Whitney said.
"Oh, yeah; I forgot about him!" Brit admitted. "He was kind of cute."
My sisters are sweet and beautiful, and I love them very much; but they are definitely sluts.
@@@ no kidding!! I thought the bitches had boyfriends!! Lol. Sounds like brother should be using condoms, dental dams and no kissing with these two, lol!! @@@
All i all a pretty fun two chapter story :) chapter three: anal exploration? (Or is that exploitation? Hehe;)
Thanks for writing!
Ok story but nothing new and as usual the sisters are always whores in the story. Well brother gets to fuck two sluts and then hopefully find someone who doesn't fuck every swinging dick. Feel bad for their boyfriends cause they cheated with their brother but also that "guy from the party last week" so no character connection with me and really just kinda skimmed the last page and half. Two stars and that's being generous
Sure Whitney and Britney may be Sluts to cheat on their boyfriends but honestly isn't it normal behavior for College Age Kids,besides I am sure their boyfriends and the Twins have an agreement that its fine to have sex with anyone they want without guilt.
So with the Twins and their Younger Brother it is okay,at that age you almost expect it cause your hormones are at their peak.Later after College if Whitney and Britney still want to cheat then they best discuss it with their boyfriends so they all can be open about their relationships and let the others know its okay to fuck other girls or guys openly.And as long as they don't hide it from the other it should be all good.
Thanks for a fun read! Loved your wonderful choice in words to describe the story and your enjoyable loveable sexy characters. A lot of fun! Looking forward to the next instalment. Cheers
Oh I wish I was the Grasshopper, cant wait to read what they do next to him