by Polok
You should continue with this story, I enjoyed reading it very much. It deserves more chapters to finish it.
nothing hoter then a brother sister inpregnation and love and becoming a
family
I hope to read more of this close brother and sister. They could use some tender love and companionship. They make a sweet couple.
Thanks for the good read.
As Peggy Lee said in her last hit song: "Is That All There Is?"
don't know anyone that would put up with her teasing kills the story seems he would take her to a motel.
way to rushed and unrealistic he would avoid her after all the teasing you make him sound like a real dumbass she sounds like a slut no wonder she can't keep a guy.
Also, Fuck you anon. Who the fuck asked you. Loser. Hope your wife or husband or whatever leaves and then see how you feel, fucking twat
sounds like the writer is either post comments on his own story or paying for them. this sucked it was in no way erotic he was an idiot and she was a slut that did nothing but tease. no way in hell he would put up with her shit.
The story was good, but need a sequel of the relationship between the siblings.
Yep could have been a little bit longer, the sex is too quick. And now 11 years we are waiting for the next day, to fix the situation...