All Comments on 'My Sister'

by Polok

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great start.

You should continue with this story, I enjoyed reading it very much. It deserves more chapters to finish it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good Start

Could lead into nice series.

jefffinnjefffinnover 13 years ago
bring on the baby

nothing hoter then a brother sister inpregnation and love and becoming a

family

C_frommnC_frommnover 13 years ago
The Way You Left Us

I'm guessing theres lots More to Come!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 13 years ago
A nice story

I hope to read more of this close brother and sister. They could use some tender love and companionship. They make a sweet couple.

Thanks for the good read.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 13 years ago
It seems like it deserves to be a series

oldwayneoldwayneabout 13 years ago
Good while it lasted, but....

As Peggy Lee said in her last hit song: "Is That All There Is?"

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
not good

don't know anyone that would put up with her teasing kills the story seems he would take her to a motel.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
total crap

way to rushed and unrealistic he would avoid her after all the teasing you make him sound like a real dumbass she sounds like a slut no wonder she can't keep a guy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Goos story

Also, Fuck you anon. Who the fuck asked you. Loser. Hope your wife or husband or whatever leaves and then see how you feel, fucking twat

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
who paid for the last comment?

sounds like the writer is either post comments on his own story or paying for them. this sucked it was in no way erotic he was an idiot and she was a slut that did nothing but tease. no way in hell he would put up with her shit.

TheOldRomanticTheOldRomanticover 7 years ago
Good story

The story was good, but need a sequel of the relationship between the siblings.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Yep could have been a little bit longer, the sex is too quick. And now 11 years we are waiting for the next day, to fix the situation...

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