by Garret2007
This has very good potential for an interesting series - great start - just a little curiosity on the part of the brother - sex will come into it slowly I should imagine - just roll it out slowly in short chapters - better build up that way
This has very good potential for an interesting series - great start - just a little curiosity on the part of the brother - sex will come into it slowly I should imagine - just roll it out slowly in short chapters - better build up that way
It looks like you had it edited or reviewed it yourself before submitting. Good story so far. Needs more sex though.