All Comments on 'My Sister's Deception Ch. 04'

Really glad to see a new installment of this story; keep 'em coming! I do hope to see more of Meghan soon tho - kind of expected her to be the one knocking. Also intrigued by Allyson and Jen's apparent permission for Kyhl to play the field. Likewise, still hoping to see the promise of a good spanking fulfilled from chapter one!

I loved reading the first 4 chapters of this story, they are great. I can't wait to read more.

it would be nice if after the wedding she and kyle found different jobs and lived together. or before the wedding she and kyle and megan all moved away and lived together. the way rick acted i can see big trouble brewing for the wedding so i might be better to go for no wedding and the three freinds moving away together.

DBRS

Love the story. I wish you would finish it quickly instead of dragging it out like you have. Great story but almost passed it by because it was part 4 and did not remember reading the other 3 parts recently.

Can't wait to read more chapters. Keep them cumming. Thanks

the story is good but you keep mixing up the names...

is he mike or kyhl? stop confusing the readers and do a better job proofreading. now delete and fix the error.

the name screw up ruined the flow and makes the writer look like a HACK.

Hot!!!!!

I see possible trouble if he can't stop calling her "Sis" in those unguarded moments

Meh...

So there's the "Allison, Mike, Mike, Allison" continuity error before she switched back to calling him Kyhl. 🤔

I think that you didn't plot out your story and suddenly discovered that when Jen made up her fake boyfriend that she should have given him a fake name to go along with it since she's probably named her brother out loud too. But discarded the idea without fixing the "Mike" mistake.

The story doesn't move forward at all really, and that was certainly a let down. 😕

I had no choice but to take a point off. 4/5