All Comments on 'My Teacher Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Orgasm, not Organism

Just a head's up, you probably just let spell check fix it to the wrong word, but instead of Orgasm, the story has Organism, and it's a total mood breaker. Not bad otherwise.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
exquisite story

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oldwinooldwinoalmost 17 years ago
Hot Story

Next time have him bring some friends to kep her three holes filed.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
A little more work and you could get an 'H'

I think you're writing and style is pretty good. However, for the genre of writing you're doing, I think it would be good to see a little more time spent on the actual acts performed. The build up is nice, but when it gets down to the dirty, you seem to rush your writing through that part. Maybe spend a little more time in that area... maybe...

Just 1 opinion though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Too bad his swimmers wouldn't make her a mommy, maybe even twins...

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