All Comments on 'My Tired Girl'

I know there aer many others on this site who will be able to give you more detailed and helpful criticism than I can. However, I thought this vignette flowed very well. The pacing was good, and you write very descriptively. It was very erotic.<br><br>

I was hoping to hear more response from his woman, as in sighs of pleasure or other indications that she was enjoying the foot and leg massages. However, the story line makes it clear that she's exhausted, so her quietness is also understandable.<br><br>

This was a lovely read, sensual, loving and sexy all rolled in one. Nice job!

That was great; I want to send it to my sweetie...it reminded me rather strongly of how well he's taken care of me after a long day. Very well-written, believable and realistic. Hopefully we can look forward to more of your work! :)

So. Fucking. Hot