All Comments on 'My Too Beautiful Wife - FTDS'

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chytownchytownover 9 years ago
Good Read***

Thanks for sharing. Have you read?? (The Rest Of A Sad Story) By Truefriend

Keoni1791Keoni1791over 9 years ago
Loved it!

Unique revenge/test. I'm a sucker for love triumphing, especially when done this well. Thanks for the story!

looking4itlooking4itover 9 years ago

Hmmmm...you are choosing reconciliation for most of your endings now. I remember this story and her attitude pissed me off...now it's his. Guess you kept things consistent. Wish you hadn't finished this one, it really didn't add anything.

ginrunnerxginrunnerxover 9 years ago
EXELENT

As usual you turned silk from a sows ear.

I don't often comment, but i thought this one deserved it, THANK YOU for your efforts they are greatly appreciated.

I have read many of the stories that you have finished and they have left me in a rage at the callous way some women treat there so called loving husbands ,

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Inline with the original characters...

...and yet still satisfying.

Most people do learn from their mistakes. Some are to self-centered to ever admit they made a mistake. Sometimes the appropriate level of shock therapy will knock some sense into those who are. That seems to be a common theme in your finishes.

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 9 years ago
Made me think over and argue with author 2.0's choices

Personally I think KK's 'Susan ' series did a more realistic job of curbing a beautiful woman's excess self entitlement. Jan's overnight epiphany about her wrongheaded choices were very rushed. STILL FTDS, from that point on, methodically put together the best possible choice for the ultimate conclusion. Commerce and career subplots were intertwined VERY well with affairs of heart. *****

zed0zed0over 9 years ago
OMG! Another RAAC!

Un-fucking-believable!

Going to have to change your name to: "Doesn't Know When To Finish The Damn Story!"

You had it right. Divorce the cheating slut wife, but keep her around as a fuck buddy.

End of the damn story!

tazz317tazz317over 9 years ago
IF BEAUTY IS ONLY SKIN DEEP

what is the core connected to. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Once was a good read from this poster.

Now has degenerated into just another wimp husband poster.

OneShotOneOneShotOneover 9 years ago
FTDS from master of BTB

To new king of the RAAC.

hawkeye0007hawkeye0007over 9 years ago
Normally

I am almost always a burn the bitch kind of guy. But, this time I can see how reconciliation is justified. The wife, though beautiful, was not too bright. She was truly remorseful and was willing to pay the price for her betrayal. I couldn't help but like her by the end. 5 stars

KarenEKarenEover 9 years ago
Not a RAAC

Just because there is a reconcilement doesn't make it a RAAC!

What cost did he pay?

He had a year of playing around while having a live-in, and got back a true loving wife at the end. Works for me!

My only problem is actually with the original story. I can go along with her being dumb enough to buy Jessica's BS, and if you twist my arm I can go along with the initial crap at the party. Where she loses me is when he says "Please don't," and she ignores him. How can she claim it's for him when he BEGS her not to do it?

m48gunnerm48gunnerover 9 years ago
Finally

I have been waiting for the finish to this story for years...finally, thanks. I really couldn't see a way for them to reconcile, yet you pulled it off without making him a wimp....I think this is one of your better FTDS!

DepopuloDepopuloover 9 years ago

as per always... and from you to be expected... self-cuck is a 1/5.... wish it could be lower but well, it is what is is.... you know your turning into FTSC not your current moniker, might wish to adjust it.

jasonnhjasonnhover 9 years ago
Nice work

I wasn't sure if I would like this but I do.

First, he deals with his arrogant wife and her arrogant lover quite decisively.

Next, I love how the concept of "making a mistake" was dealt with. His wife's actions were carefully considered and executed. They were carried out as planned. The only SNAFU was the outcome. This was no mistake.

And that leads me to why I wasn't sure if I would like the remainder of the story. When a person acts in such an arrogant and disrespectful manner as Jan does, it represents a fundamental and serious flaw in their character. She is so self centered that she could not see the damage she was doing and her arrogance was beyond belief. That is who she was. That's not an easy thing to fix. How could Andrew possibly trust such a person or expect that she could break a lifetime of self centeredness?

The story offers, to me, a possible solution. For a year, Jan's beauty is stripped from her. She is divorced and has no hold on Andrew. He dates others. She is in Andrew's life solely on Andrew's discretion. She seems to accept her time of penance and takes it to heart. As much as possible, she seems to have learned her lesson. She did cheat, and now Andrew has had his sexual needs met by others. After a year, things seem rebalanced as best they can be. I guess time will tell.

francis_toliverfrancis_toliverover 9 years ago
As always FTDS

a great read. I don't always agree with your course, but I am always glad to see your stories posted. You are one of the really good writers still posting to the loving wives section and I for one am grateful you choose to share your work with us.

As to this story, I liked it a lot. It is not to often we get to see a believable transformation from the kind of person that cheats to the kind of person you want to live your life with. Very well done. By the end I actually felt sorry for her and a bit pissed at him for hanging on to anger for the sake of the pleasure he got in hurting her. Considering my opinion on betrayal, the fact that your writing brought me to that point says how good a writer you are. Five easy stars.

Francis Toliver

WriteOnGuyWriteOnGuyover 9 years ago
My Two Cents Worth

It is very clear that she is a self centered, arrogant, spoiled, gorgeous bitch; She knows it and has used it to get what she wants all of her life. I don't for a moment buy, after she deliberately publicly humiliated him in front of his co-workers, she is going to suddenly become so totally submissive, as she is portrayed, and put up with his childish conditions.

She'll be moving on. And as it mentioned in the story, trading up. That's what gorgeous, career trophy wives do!

WriteOnGuyWriteOnGuyover 9 years ago
Whoops!

I forgot to add the P.S.

Despite what my previous comment might sound like - I really liked your story FTDS.

Cheers,

Guy

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Hot damn!

Even though it wasn't a BTB, I really enjoyed this one!

Men have to learn a lesson I learned about 40 years ago. My young wife started being a real cunt to me. Way past a bee-yatch, if you catch my drift. I couldn't take it and finally snapped. We'd been married perhaps a year or less. I balled her out, told her exactly the way it was going to be and if she didn't like it, don't let the door hit her in the ass. Now, this was a beautiful young woman and she'd never been talked to like that before but I couldn't take it from her any longer.

The result? She absolutely love me taking control and laying down the law. I was stunned when she told me it is something most women need, whether they know it or not. They NEED the man to be the man and make the woman be the woman. I learned a big lesson from that. Don't misunderstand, she isn't a submissive, far from it with a PHD and a high powered job now. But she still demands I be the man she I force her to always be my woman and I have to confess, it's kind of neat.

A few times a month over the years I make sure she's 'available' to me. I'll have her wear a short dress with nothing under it and 'force' her to submit to me. It is something she loves, if not done too often. I might take her over the edge of the couch and then have her clean my cock and let my sperm run down her leg until the next time, and usually, there is about 4 times during a day like this. When it's over, its over though. She is better for it, being treated like a woman and taken whenever I want. I'm better for it because it makes me feel like the man I am.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good story for a change

She changed from being beautiful, makes some women full of it and guys jump at any thing they do or say. But she really changed and made it work , one he has a home with three kids and a happy ,successful life. Better ending then burn the bitch. People slip , hopefully they can and will turn it around , it takes to to make that work

Y

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
4*s

You improved the original story. Added depth to their relationship. Good dialogue with the various characters.

I especially like that she changed and he changed as time passed. The added touch of his employer/ bosses being aware of and helping him deal with her, was a very creative plot point. Both at the awful christmas party and a year later , when he is in line for a big promotion. Liked your seamless move of the story from England to the U.S. Nicely done.

This is your best continued story in months!! Thanks

AMerryMan

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great Story !

FTDS: This is one of your best stories I have read. I'm a big fan of the BTB stories and this could have gone either way. I do like how you did finish this story, I do also like happy ever after endings also. You made it clear that she made a mistake but didn't intentionally want to hurt Andy. You convinced me that Jessica was the one that needed to be burned. Great story keep up the good work.

javmor79javmor79over 9 years ago
Didn't like this one.

Didn't enjoy this one. I didn't mind the reconciliation. It was just that he was so shallow that he was completely unlikeable. He was so insecure that he needed his wife to be ugly? I have had girlfriends that I felt were out of my league. If I'm being honest, the majority of my female companions (including my wife) are out of my league. I am attracted to attractive women. I have been cheated on by one of these attractive women, and she shattered my heart. But I would never say that I will only go after ugly girls because it makes me more secure in the fact that they won't cheat. I just became more selective in deciding who was simply a pretty face, and who was a beautiful woman worth spending time with.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Ya shoulda paid more attention to your moniker

Ya shoulda finished the damn story when it was finished, in the middle when the story was ended. Reconcilation stories are good -- when they make sense and are not forced. This fails on both counts. Everything about her changing was contrary to everything that came before. It wasn't Jan at the end, it was some forced and phony caricature with that name.

<P>

There was nothing in the last half that negated all he told her, that all she thought about was her, that she didn't really respect him, that she really didn't love him. Oh, sure, you wrote some words that, superficially. seem to support the change, but they are phony and simplistic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Respectively Requesting...

Thank you for another great finish. I really enjoyed it. I give you 4.69*. 😊

On your profile page you list 5 stories that demand a finish. Could you please tell us if/when you plan to post these stories? Personally, I am watching for your follow ups to CastleStone's "Sofia" and Sub Babs's "A Teachers Way Out of a Dilemma".

gatorhermitgatorhermitover 9 years ago
Excellent Story; Clever Resolution

Great fantasy. Never happen IRL, but that doesn't detract from enjoying the story. This reconciliation did make sense.

honeylicker1124honeylicker1124over 9 years ago
It was a good story to begin with...

and it was a good story to end. It would have been easy to kick her to the curb and gone on. But he would always have wondered..."What if..."

Always enjoy your endings..5 *'s

njlaurennjlaurenover 9 years ago
Liked it

Realistic in that he wanted proof that she changed,and also that he himself thought what was revenge wasn't totally.By her abandoning what made her the bitch she was,her looks,he forced her to realize what love meant,it was penance and more.

What would be interesting would be jessicas storu,why she was such a bitch and what happens to her,does she ever figure out how horrible she was?challenge for you ftds:)

Tim413413Tim413413over 9 years ago
Very nice conclusion to the

original story. The original wasn't much, but FTDS's effort made the entire story worthwhile.

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
I like the outcome

just not the way it was achieved. Maybe I am just an old romantic fool, but, what is wrong with being faithful and beautiful? Outside beauty does not automatically make the inside ugly. does it? It is possible to have physical attractiveness without becoming an insufferably selfish and unattractive soul, isn't it?

Even a beautiful person can honor and respect their spouse.

a banana split is not the solution to infidelity.

impo_58impo_58over 9 years ago
I liked this one too...

I liked this one too...Very much...Very intense...thank you

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 9 years ago

a great chapter with a beautiful ending.

Thanks for the read

ken philipsken philipsover 9 years ago
Great stuff - actually quite poignant

FTDS. Mate, you are on a roll. This story was quite poignant, touching really, & also very grounded in potential reality as opposed to pure fantasy. Keep it up pls. Ken

LostnFoundBinLostnFoundBinover 9 years ago
Nicely done.

Well written. Deeper then the original chapter but that was needed to bring out your version of the rest of the story. I liked the husbands response, the "executive" support characters, and the plausibility of the resolution (not sure about the fake scar bit but hey it's your story).

pilot4pilot4over 9 years ago
A very good conclusion.

Great continuation and ending to the story. As usual. 5.

Ducky7Ducky7over 9 years ago
OK I liked this one. Really heart felt and warm

Does that make you human? 5's man.

Corsair46Corsair46over 9 years ago
Great Job

anony-mouse is an idiot only intending on belittling other authors ( I don't even honor him by capitalizing his handle if you call it that). Really nice finish to a story that really was not finished.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Female opinion

FTDS's work is a mixed bag, but generally good because sucky people should pay for their misdeeds. This one is a bit simplistic in the idea of pretty = bitch and homely = perfect woman. (No bias from me as I'm a solid 5 myself). The men are equally simplistic in their responses, and more than a bit unbelievable in the idea they wouldn't tap that super sexy secretary given half a chance. (And I'm sure I'm biased on that.) The biggest problem I always have with RAAC is trust. These stories always have such a profound violation of trust. He didn't buy a secrete bass boat with the tax return. She didn't waste the emergency fund on an ugly ass pair of Hollywood Ho shoes. These are always personal betrayals. How do you ever come back from that? I couldn't live in a kevlar vest waiting for the knife in the back.

karan9876karan9876over 9 years ago
Meant for the cucks.... sucked!

The ending was one that was highly cuckish. Sucked to the core because it had a nice build up and then he screws it all up by taking her back.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Really nice reconciliation story

Wish there was more like this - done with dignity. 5*

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 9 years ago
Oh My

Hard to believe, I get sick for five days and this is what I returned to read. I know your policy, and I've read thousands of tales, You threw me for a loop on this one. The betrayal and the obvious cheating. The public humiliation. I wouldn't touch her, be seen with her or acknowledge her presence ever again. As far as I see, at one point she would bring another female into their bed.

You know, I await your work and after this travesty I'm a little concerned.

No rating

not worth a rating

Drbeamer3333Drbeamer3333over 9 years ago
Enjoyed it

A roundabout way to find reconciliation. thanks for the offering.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I found it more a good read than....

.....the obvious and usual fare....

There is a high divorce rate in UK and USA. But, it's also true that something approaching one quarter of those divorces end in remarriage of the same couple.

The "teaching" element was interesting, if not very realistic, IMO.

I have never met a woman that would have put up with "getting" ugly for a few outings a month, while her live-in ex-husband dated and fucked three other women.

That's a very complicated number of women to keep from one another and to keep straight with.

Nope, that aspect didn't ring well for me, but overall, I liked it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
love your work

Hey man awesome turn around. Great writing...plz look into "soccer mom and a bully." I got trapped into reading it last month & hate the plot line, I felt the kid should left his mom humiliated and kicked the bully's ass. So please read it & give it a much better ending. For a FAN

lance_spearmanlance_spearmanover 9 years ago
Good story

Much better than a lot of the stuff you've been putting out recently.

But...

"I also got the house at the beach, the condo in Aspen, .. "

Didn't you mean to say the villa in Spain and the country estate in Yorkshire?

The original act of humiliation occurred a the Dorchester on Park Lane, not the Waldorf in NYC.

green117green117over 9 years ago
I do like this one the best of your submissions so far

Again, your protagonists grow.

I would suggest that, if you do have experience with the unusually attractive, you should know that there is an underlying insecurity in most cases - I mean, if your identity was entirely dependent on your >appearance<, wouldn't you be a bit insecure? And then, when you get older...

Her claim was that her affair was driven by her desire to pander to the male protagonist... and somehow, that makes a kind of sideways sense. God knows I've run into people who think that being "good in bed" somehow shows them to be exceptionally worthy. So the female protagonist's desire to hold onto something else to base her self esteem on might be motivated by that search for something a bit more substantial than appearances.

Not that it shows up in your writing - I'm suggesting alternative back story to make the female protagonists' sacrifice more understandable. Hummm... I suspect you may be channeling theUnoriginalist in parts. But that was a different story with different motivations.

I'm guessing that the scene where the business types showed their sense of entitlement with their choice of decorative personal assistants was meant to be ironic - and the final realization by the male protagonist that in fact he got everything, and that he did have a wife as virtue laden as the executive group, was his moment of growth.

But then again, I doubted that there was text strong enough to change the POV of the BTB crowd... but in the comments, someone said you did just that!

Congratulations!

Green-something

IronDragonIronDragonover 9 years ago
A mixed bag.

You mixed Reconciliation with BTB/Consequence into something palatable. That takes talent. She put him through Hell, so he did the same to her before the Reconciliation near the end. I won't pretend that it wasn't a bumpy ride along the way. Most of me was honestly hoping that he'd just let her go and be done with her, and then move on and find a better lady.

That said, it wasn't quite as over-the-top as some that you've done, but it worked. I guess I'm softening a bit, since I'm over what my ex-fiancé did to me. Speaking as the husband of a wife who's a good Hollywood 7, it isn't always true about pretty women making horrible wives. FTDS, I have to give you full credit for doing what you do best... Finishing The Damn Story.

5 Solid Stars.

carvohicarvohiover 9 years ago
Two remarks and a sigh...

Comment one: The original story was so degrading for the husband I saw no possibility of reconciliation, but you managed to not only make it happen you made it downright possible, even likely. I think Karen's comment is off, the bad wife knew what she was doing at the Christmas party. She really believed she could get away with it, but Andrew 'manned up' and then she realized she really loved him and wilted.

Comment two: I thought the 'making her plain' and fooling around was way over the top, and a whole year of penance was way too long. That's an opinion. Andrew did love her; I think the year would have evolved away from the penance to a settled, dare I say deeper relationship. I still loved it; I'm always for trying to find a way to reconcile.

And now for the sigh; You put up something in the non-erotic section I thought was just too savage; certainly way below your standards. This piece restored my confidence in you. It's OK to be tough, it's even good, but senseless cruelty just isn't you. I'm glad I read and you wrote this, and I hope you got the meanness out of your system.

A terrific five!

green117green117over 9 years ago
Humm.... my previous comment was truncated...

Not sure how that happened.

I went on to say that in that perspective, the female protagonists' change and affair makes sense - she may have needed some sense of identity other than just her appearance.

I also mentioned that a similar transition, if for entirely different reasons, occurred in the first piece by TUO.

And I complemented the writer on doing well enough to change the apparent opinions of some the BTB crew, which I doubted could be done.

Humm... I also thought the entitlement shown by the executives towards the end of the story about decorative PAs seemed ironic... and that the moment of growth of the male protagonist had to be at the very end.

Liked the long form of this comment better, but what can you do.

Green-something.

(ps - if this was due to editing by the author, my apologies... send me a note if a comment by me is inappropriate, and I won't assume it was an editing error)

smmhomesmmhomeover 9 years ago
Add one more voice... 'Well Done!'

Very impressive work.

Yes, it was a bit over-the-top fantastical in the plotline… but so was the story you finished. Besides, what’s wrong with letting go of reality just a bit here in Lit – for if not here, then where? Even if the plotline was a bit out there, the character development was very adept and believable. I think that’s how I see this as a balance of fun ride, but also touching…

lance_spearmanlance_spearmanover 9 years ago
@javmor69

"he wanted his wife to be ugly because he was insecure." I don't think that was the author's intent at all. The idea was to make her spend a year looking drab so she learns what it is like not be be able to rely on looks.

I thought it was a very well crafted response to the situation.

ramonbrookramonbrookover 9 years ago
I usually really enjoy and agree with how you FTDS

And this was no exception! While sometimes the circumstances need a BTB solution, it doesn't all the time! I really thought you did a GREAT job with finishing this story!

I'm a sucker for a happy ending! 5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Once again FTDS you managed to nail it.

The original story cried out for a scorched earth BTB ending, But somehow you came up with a reconciliation ending that even I liked. And I usually want the cheating spouse to at the very least be vaporised.

You made her "walk a mile in someone else's shoes" and did so perfectly.

Bravo and thank you,

Harryin VAHarryin VAover 9 years ago
a new low is mindlessly stupid and laughably bad plots

wow there are a LOT of stupid readers supporting this terrible ending. With each new post FTDS gets worse and worse. For example HOW is looking ugly with wig and bad clothing going to fix/ alter the wife dangerous mind set? This solution is a joke. She really isnt UGLY... just pretends to be.

for a year?? wow come on folks get a fucking clue . do you idiots REALLY think walking about in baggy clothes is going to "fix" anything??

she DESTROYED his career and went out of her way to humiliate him at the xmas Party.

how is that fixed with the husband going out a screwing other women with the acceptance of the wife?

InescuInescuover 9 years ago
Excellent Read

I enjoy how you take a plot that cries out for savage BTB and twist it in another direction without making the guy a wimp. Please keep them coming.

krosis666krosis666over 9 years ago
Huh

She pretends to be ugly Betty, tells him he can cheat too, if he wants, and all the lies, humiliation, betrayal and disrespect are forgiven and forgotten?

Most unsatisfactory.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Break with the formula

and somehow people think you did it wrong. They seem to want 2-D cutout characters. I thought it was an excellent plot twist, and a year is enough time for someone to change. Well done.

tazz317tazz317over 9 years ago
SOME PEOPLE WONT ACCEPT

what they have. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Hey, I wrote that!

Never could get the follow up to work how I wanted. In case you're interested my intention for Part 2 was quite different - Andy would go up to the hotel room and find them engaged in something entirely innocuous (eg Chess). Jan wanted to see if he would put up a fight for her, and actually did not want to cheat. She did want both Jessica and Andy, and at the same time, but only if he would agree.

I never managed to write a version of this that I liked, hence the lack of a follow up.

TavadelphinTavadelphinabout 9 years ago
The human animal is capable of learning until it dies -

Sometimes they do not want to or are really slow on the up take -= but they can = if they really want to -=

retmstrretmstralmost 9 years ago
****

Good to read Jan finally got her head out of her ass. Good finish to the tale, FTDS. Good reading. Cheers!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Andy finally got his threesome!

I read the original story and that was depressing. Jessica was really stupid just like Jan for thinking the ultimate male fantasy is seeing two women together or not being there. No the fantasy is being with two women at the same time in bed that is what a threesome is all about. At the beginning Jan should've waited and told Jessica too wait for Andy to come home so to make hers and Andy's fantasy come true. Too bad for Jan and Jessica ruined it but also helped Andy after the divorce to get his fantasy threesome with two other women and probably a foursome with the other one for a year. Give yourself a pat on the back Jan and Jessica you beautiful dumbass bitches!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

he was away 4nights each week when the Affair / Seduction of his wife started.

which means his Wife had 3 days each week to Talk to him about it.

...

Jessica was never setting up a 3 some / poly relationship..

she was Stealing His Wife...

ffs anon Jessica had No Intention of Sharing his Wife it was pure BS to seduce her

and take her away from him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I guess that was an okay ending

Sure as hell better than the non-ending from the original story. God I hated that one. But Andrew seemed like two people. The powerful, successful business man and the insecure wimpy husband. I can see divorcing her. I can't see letting her stay in the house just because she packs on the lbs, doesn't wear contacts or makeup and never goes out. What was she doing the entire year while he was at work? Knitting? And to compound his insecurity and feed his confusion, he dates and sleeps with other women? How did his bosses know about what he was doing in his private life? There were a few holes in this but over all I liked the finished product. Thanks for finishing yet another poor story and making it palatable.

amyyumamyyumover 8 years ago
Entertaining

and that's the main goal, isn't it? 5*

hanibtorrhanibtorrabout 8 years ago
Great

Great story. It made me look at my wife differently. And that is GREAT. Thank you.

gara5289gara5289about 8 years ago

One of the best reconciliation stories i've read. Felt real and no part of it felt contrived, tacked on etc

sbrooks103sbrooks103about 8 years ago
Very Good

“I thought it was something we could share.” – In THAT case, rather than CHEAT with Jessica, you go to your husband with the idea of a threesome, INCLUDING him fucking Jessica!

As he said, doing it ONCE was one thing, lying about it was something else, and as SHE finally realized, if he would love it, why didn’t Jessica want her to tell him?

As Andy said, they had already had their time(s) alone, the Christmas party was the time to invite him to join them.

Although I lean towards BTB, I don't mind reconciliation when it's earned, as I feel it was here.

hawkeye0007hawkeye0007about 8 years ago
The Best

This is the best story this author ever produced. I am usually a BTB kind of guy. This was one of those rare situations where taking her back really did work out for the best. The wife wasn't evil, just stupid. But, she wised up nicely.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
A beautiful requiem for John of FTDS...

John will be proud...

sbrooks103sbrooks103about 8 years ago
Re-Reading

There may be a few repeats in here:

“She assured me you'd love it” – That could explain the initial seduction (although, if that was true, why did it have to wait till he was out of town, and why lie to him?), that DOESN’T explain ignoring his CLEAR wishes at the party!

“I just made a mistake” – It wasn’t A mistake, and how can he ever trust her again?

"But I did it for us, Andy” – As KarenE said, how can it be for “us” when he is begging her not to do it?

As he said, they had already done it alone MANY times, why couldn’t he join in at the Christmas party?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Excellent conclusion, thanks 5*

Good humour, genuine emotion and well written. A little far fetched with dating 3 other women but there was a point to it. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Not The Least Bit Enjoyable

This is a rather blackhearted and cynical screw-turner.

Who wants to spend time with such a preachy, pompous, and self-satisfied jackass as this protagonist? Makes your skin crawl.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Jan And Marcia Murdered The Marriage

At the end of the agreed upon one-year period following the divorce Jan was once again enforcing her power over Andy. It is unforgivable for the marriage partner who murdered the marriage to proclaim she had made a 'mistake' and that the marriage partner she dominated must forgive her and accept her back in the marriage. A marriage is like murdering a child of the union and expecting the husband to accept her apology and go back to her being in charge of the marriage she had destroyed. If he doesn't run for the exit, he deserves whatever hell comes his way. Very poor ending.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Ignore the sados its magnificent

Really enjoyed this.I think one of the best.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Well Done

Much better ending than the original story.

Thanks for sharing it. 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Liked it a lot!!

I married a very beautiful woman also....the only difference is she never really believes she's beautiful. Which makes her even more beautiful. Loved the story and also the finish. He was a bit of an asshole with the 3 women and carrying on for a year with them but it ended well.

Oldfart72Oldfart72over 7 years ago
Come on

I think most of the anonymous have shit for brains drop the anonymous and put on a handle u chicken shits

Pappy7Pappy7about 7 years ago
The thing that I find

so hard to stomach about these "continuation" stories is how true to the original characters the writers are able to stay and still come up with a manageable ending. And that is where FTDS excels above all the rest. Very well done in this instance and the story was over the top, of course. But how else will a reconciliation work after all of the crap that went on before. We thrive on over the top here in lovingwives land and, hoo, hoo, another very enjoyable read. Thanks.

Drbeamer3333Drbeamer3333about 7 years ago
Enjoyed it

A nice continuation. Thanks for the offering.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Thank You

Excellent ending for this story.

danoctoberdanoctoberover 6 years ago
Nice reconciliation story.

A terrific story written by one of the Masters of LW's fiction. *****

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I Was Once Married To An Unbelievably Beautiful Woman

She looked like a young Goldie Hawn. I was in the military and was gone for months at a time. When I was back at home, I heard the rumors and gossip. I finally caught her in the act. During the divorce I found out that in the two years we had been married, she had been with 56 men...many of them had served with me. After me, she met and moved in with a guy who beat her. But she continued to cheat. She gave him three children to raise that the entire community knows are not his. Although they never married, they are still living together.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Making her un-beautiful...

...can't make her an un-bitch.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
1 star

well written as always , but a bad bad ending .

anonymousinblueanonymousinbluealmost 6 years ago
I can't believe it

He said this: "I knew that with just a little effort, she could be that same gorgeous woman again, with all the shit that came with it." then decided to go for her. I just can't believe it! This insight should have been left out or countered with something worthy of note. Like maybe with things like this, he should always keep sight on appreciating the relationship. Like he did before when she cheated?

The guy says she was much more beautiful now, and I don't have reason to see it. It was just....sorry....written in. She cried at not being given special treatment at the grocery store? Well, alright, grief for loss is expected, and so is the reaction. It implies her acceptance, but could as easily be resentment. I guess all you need is to kick a jerk in the balls to win a girl...and I guess that is a fair play.

The story was too light on details of dates, like, real details, romantic and emotional ones, not fucking ability comparisons. That's really amateur to compare women like that in a story when you're looking for a companion. I guess he wasn't, just revenge. Then how could he have resolved his issues? Anyway, the details would have probably increased the tension appreciably. You put the detail in, you increased the scope, but didn't pay the toll that road requires.

Anyway, if you don't always let her get whatever she wants, you're on your way to becoming a controlling jerk; if you do, you risk losing respect. Balance is good...But he didn't have it at first. I forgot what the story said, but I bet his dad "stayed for the kids," which is selfish, shortsighted, dumb, and destructive to self and child. Not wanting to go put the children through divorce? No, more like not wanting to lose money and face. Good for teaching the children to permanently accept unacceptable situations that you have some control over, teaching that personal values are irrelevant/oneself doesn't matter, demonstrating hypocrisy on treatment of people, demonstrating that marriages and relationships should be emotionally distant to reduce fighting, demonstrating home life is meant to be cold, teaching short term losses for long term gains is a fallacy, teaching it's better to be miserable and mistreated than alone, and more.

PowersworderPowersworderalmost 6 years ago

I would've taken her back under those circumstances... she paid her dues and atoned for what she did.

Nice reconciliation story.

26thNC26thNCalmost 6 years ago
I miss him

No one could finish a damn story like FTDS. I hope some one comes along who can do this for us again. He didn't do many RAAC endings, but I liked this one. Jan paid a heavy price to get him back. In this case, it was the correct decision. Thanks FTDS.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Over

His revenge was over the top.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Excellent.

The comment by Anonymous on 07/19/18 was typical of a brain dead Liberal.... too dense to comprehend that his wife had shit in his face and his need to humble her and then make her prove herself worthy for him to ever take another chance on her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
to anyone calling it revenge

it's not. just because the husband is so very sensitive, he views it that way. he told her, "you wouldn't be able to handle what it would take to get back with me."

That decision to pay PENANCE was her dependent decision! she humbled herself completely. she accepted a lower status, both in looks and pecking order. she wasn't his equal partner, just a friend with benefits. he didn't flaunt his relationships to her at all. she could leave at any time. he didn't beat her, humiliate her, berate her.

if you mean his initial reaction, yea. that WAS revenge. almost reflexive though. she ruined his image in the company when she broke company rules. he pointed that out to the higher ups. her decision, but his observations. hell, she was pretty open about her cheating with another employee, they might have found out regardless.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nice story, really like it

Can you please have a look at :

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1099143&page=submissions

he never finish the story, it had potential, a guy like you could do something good with this one, thanks.

johnadpjohnadpover 5 years ago

On sooooo many levels this was so fucked up:

1. I didn't read the comments, but I'm going to guess that this was missed. He fucked three "ugly" women on the side. Were these like the 72 virgins Muslim suicide bombers are supposed to get? These women have no feelings, no worth, no character? So abhored that supposedly his beautiful wife was entitled and selfish, so it wasn't selfish of him to use these three women who "catered" to him because they obviously hoped to have a relationship when he knew all along that he was simply going to use them to get back at his wife? So why are his feelings of hurt and betrayal worth more than what those women must have felt all along and especially after he dumps them when he is done with them.

2. He actually should have dumped his wife after the year, because obviously only a mentally deranged woman with no self-esteem would have put up with the bullshit he put her through to assuage his feelings of inferiority.

Look, I would have dumped my wife if she cheated on me, but I do feel very differently if it was with another woman. Then I would look for a triad type relationship. What she did at the Christmas party was pretty fucked up, but she did explain that and she seemed sincere. Putting her through what he did was cool for a little while, maybe about three months and for her to see what unattractive people go through was kind of cool actually. But a year of putting her through that, cheating on her left and right and throwing it in her face, fucking over those other women which shows he is slime because they were "ugly" so obviously inferior to him so he could take advantage of them, treating her like shit was way too much.

A woman taking what she did for a year doesn't show that she loves him. It just shows that she has no self-esteem or self-worth. It's more evident of that than a man putting up with a cheating wife.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Shut the fuck up John....

No one gives a fuck about you and you turd if an opinion. No one is going to read your essay expounding on how much of a pussy you are. Fuck off.

cybojicybojiover 5 years ago
Vanity

Of a pretty woman is a hard thing to deal as a mortal man. Truth is it almost always leads to the destruction of the man. I call them praying mantis girls. Good work 5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Arrogant

What an arrogant twat Andy is.So she hurt him ,but in her mind she was doing him a favour.His revenge was over the top and how his bosses could consider him for promotion the way he treated her is beyond me.Also where did she work whilst they were divorced.?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
One of the 7 deadly sins

Has to be the most original stories to a cheating wife series. Didn't think the cheating on his part was necessary, but the rest wow. Got her back without a sniff of cuckold shown, very hard to do.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Well Well

Very nicely developed except for Andrew's behaviour with other women, after the divorce. It was the only sour note in the story and of course, the implied hypocrisy of the Company heads and their " eating from other menus". Still, a five star story.

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