All Comments on 'My Weekend with Nikki & Dave'

This belongs in erotic couplings unless you

write a part two where the aunt and her go nuts

on each other. Or unless it turns out that Dave

is somehow a relative she didn't know about...

5* great beginning.

Fits more in erotic couplings. Keep writing.

not really incest but a good hott story! keep it up.

Your an amazing writer. For a first time erotic write, it was a very good read and... well... erotic.

That was really good! Made me cum too!!

I'm assuming you wrote this over ten years ago? Your right, it's not really incest unless maybe if you had been in a three way with your aunt, and then it's 'ify'. We are all assuming this really happened to you, songwriting about it was fine. Now, you should have taken that experience, created a character and written some incest fiction. You should write more. Be nasty, readers love it. Keep writing.

XYZ