by Littlerack
Comes in many form's but to sit and watch. your loved one taking out 10 people and having full on sex afterwards. Great story like to read more like it.
That sounds like the plot of a new action hero movie. Not non-erotic, however. But that just added to the tale. Call Disney. Excellent tale.
Five Stars
Kind of worried at the possibility of her knee giving out suddenly. They are better designed for mashing ball than breaking skulls. You know I have my doubts about the possible sexual connotations of this story... Too much blood.
Lr, this was a delightful parody of the entirely ridiculous genre of Action Anti-Heroics. So over the top and off the edge of Reality.
I was tempted to take a star off for a totally unrealistic "email tracking" thing, but what the heck, it's a fantasy, so 5 stars for subverting expectations and making the LW ACTUAL loving wife.
My only improvement suggestion would have been to have her give the extra money to the family of the guy she was tricked into killing.