by luckyhusband5
You would have to be retarded or 15 or both to enjoy this piece of shit story.
write about something other than our military and women with no morals, ethics, or character. Those folks dont deserve this.
The writer is just making a carbon copy of one he just published. I browsed through it to see if is was as bad as the first one..IT WAS. Give it up before someone bashes your skull in you sob. You aren't a writer of erotica .you are hust a jerk off freak...
Only a fool would like this story, and only a complete, no talent, idiot would write it.
Ignore them, they hated it that much they read it did'nt they. The story is good, please carry on there is a lot of scope for the main character. Looking forward to reading more.