All Comments on 'My Wife's Firsts'

It has all of the makings for a good story, but sadly fell short. In my opinion it lacks character, emotions and solid descriptions. Not badly done, but could have been much better.

I think the potential is there. I'd welcome reading future stories.

"...final lap we pasted a black guy..." What did you paste him with? Glue?

The word should have been "passed".

You need to do a DNA test on your kid more.