All Comments on 'MyFather the Ob/Gyn: MyDaughter Ch. 2'

by lustful_aztec

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SEX_VAMPYRESEX_VAMPYREalmost 20 years ago
Good story

You should not have added the gang bang. What you could have added was that the mechanic was screwing the wife. You should write a story with the doctor fucking the 8 mos pregnant daughter on the exam table and drinking her breastmilk.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
More action

Should get the wife involved with the daughter as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Even Hotter

I didn't think it could get any hotter than part one. Boy was I wrong!!! I would have preferred not having the gangbanging. Bringing violence into the the story spoiled the story for me. The story was perfect without it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
mmmmm

this story was incredibly hott. i cant believe its 3pm on a saturday afternooon and i just fingered myself in the middle of my kitchen...mmmm Thanks... more please

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I had to lie on my bed!

Super-hot story!

I had to bring my laptop into my bedroom and lie down to finish reading it. I needed to be in a certain position, if you know what I mean. Wow! LOL!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Hot!

My pussy & I thank you profusely!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
........

this is sickening

SayJCooSayJCooover 14 years ago
wow

wow, im super hornii

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
More, Please, as her pragnancy advances.

Please continue her pregnancy and relationship. This is excellent fantasy writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
So so so wet

u really need to do more we all want it u should con with him doing her when she is 8 months along

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Chapter 1 good, this one.......

.......ruined it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
HOT!

Ty u for making my pussy deliciously wet. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
amazing

I want my dad to fuck me so bad. Make more please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
ruined a great story

The ending ruined one of the best stories I've read for a while. Should have left it as father/daughter, or maybe added the wife/mother.......

hman103hman103over 10 years ago
I agree.

Nice job but I have to agree with some of the other comments, this was an awesome piece of fiction until the ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
loved it

You cant leave it hanging like this damnit! We need another chapter!

qazqwe1qazqwe1over 10 years ago
W- Wow

This is by far the best story you made, Did this really happen?

Great job!

I expect more of your better work in the future that is a damn good story!

lustful_azteclustful_aztecover 10 years agoAuthor
Coming soon.

Second of two stories coming soon.

SensuousEleganceSensuousEleganceover 9 years ago
Almost perfect

Til you wrote Juan in story!

mezmerizedmezmerizedalmost 6 years ago
As long as...

Juan & his co-workers aren't the ones who get her pregnant...

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Juan fuck it up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I have to agree with most of the other comments

Bringing Juan and his workers into the story, ruined it for me. That changed the story from a great incest story, to a story about a girl who has become a slut

The writing was OK, except for it was a little hard to follow, what was happening

Keep up the good writing. You sure know how to make my pussy get wet.

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