by lustful_aztec
You should not have added the gang bang. What you could have added was that the mechanic was screwing the wife. You should write a story with the doctor fucking the 8 mos pregnant daughter on the exam table and drinking her breastmilk.
I didn't think it could get any hotter than part one. Boy was I wrong!!! I would have preferred not having the gangbanging. Bringing violence into the the story spoiled the story for me. The story was perfect without it.
this story was incredibly hott. i cant believe its 3pm on a saturday afternooon and i just fingered myself in the middle of my kitchen...mmmm Thanks... more please
Super-hot story!
I had to bring my laptop into my bedroom and lie down to finish reading it. I needed to be in a certain position, if you know what I mean. Wow! LOL!
Please continue her pregnancy and relationship. This is excellent fantasy writing.
u really need to do more we all want it u should con with him doing her when she is 8 months along
The ending ruined one of the best stories I've read for a while. Should have left it as father/daughter, or maybe added the wife/mother.......
Nice job but I have to agree with some of the other comments, this was an awesome piece of fiction until the ending.
You cant leave it hanging like this damnit! We need another chapter!
This is by far the best story you made, Did this really happen?
Great job!
I expect more of your better work in the future that is a damn good story!
Juan & his co-workers aren't the ones who get her pregnant...
I have to agree with most of the other comments
Bringing Juan and his workers into the story, ruined it for me. That changed the story from a great incest story, to a story about a girl who has become a slut
The writing was OK, except for it was a little hard to follow, what was happening
Keep up the good writing. You sure know how to make my pussy get wet.