by KansasTrouble
but the story seemed a bit flat. I would have liked to have had more of an idea what the "mystery man" looked like, because it was vague, as if you feel the need to end your stories fast. That's something I got from some of your other work, which is also interesting but lacks the detail that would make them extraordinary. Sounds like a criticism but it really isn't, because I find your story topics interesting.