All Comments on 'Naga Princess'

by Paul Lucas

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Wow!

This story really blew me away! What fun!

KewlBlueTigerKewlBlueTigeralmost 18 years ago
Very Creative Creature

I loved the Naga and your characterization of the princess. Wonderful story. Good work. Can't wait to read your next piece.

DarkniciadDarkniciadalmost 18 years ago
Excellent!

Excellent characters and a great storyline!

xxxecilxxxecilabout 15 years ago
Alluring

AN excellent, alluring fantasy vision rife with erotic appeal, it was most captivating.

PurpleThreadPurpleThreadalmost 14 years ago
indeed...

It had all the elements of a cautionary fable, all the vivid description of a popular fantasy novel, and all the explicit detail of a fulfilling erotic story.

Very well done. All-around. Bravo.

MongolSamuraiMongolSamuraiover 13 years ago
Fantastic read!

Great fun, entertaining characters, love the snake fetish! Fine writing, better than most. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Awsome!

You should definitely continue with this story line

Kirilios_XianKirilios_Xianover 12 years ago
Very Nice!

I am most certainly looking forward to what the Queen will do to/with the Princess next! Perhaps breed her personally, spawning ever-smarter Naga?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

I have been a science fiction/fantasy reader since I was 14. This instantly became a favorite. Looking forward to the book.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Well done

👏👏👏👏🐍 favorite now!

MisterFriskyMisterFriskyalmost 6 years ago

Please make another one where she gets her intellect back and doesn't just think like a wild animal and is returned to her Naga form

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

A rewrite where she doesn't lose her nerve would be better.

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