by Paul Lucas
Please make another one where she gets her intellect back and doesn't just think like a wild animal and is returned to her Naga form
I have been a science fiction/fantasy reader since I was 14. This instantly became a favorite. Looking forward to the book.
I am most certainly looking forward to what the Queen will do to/with the Princess next! Perhaps breed her personally, spawning ever-smarter Naga?
Great fun, entertaining characters, love the snake fetish! Fine writing, better than most. Keep up the good work!
It had all the elements of a cautionary fable, all the vivid description of a popular fantasy novel, and all the explicit detail of a fulfilling erotic story.
Very well done. All-around. Bravo.
AN excellent, alluring fantasy vision rife with erotic appeal, it was most captivating.
I loved the Naga and your characterization of the princess. Wonderful story. Good work. Can't wait to read your next piece.