All Comments on 'Naked Again'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
You left me hanging

It had a nice start, but left things hanging in the middle. Bring on more, and quickly, please.

asiaprofasiaprofover 17 years ago
Very nice, especially for a first submission

Is this the start of a series?

McSmoothieMcSmoothieover 8 years ago
Nice but short

Love the story but it could do with developing.

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