by yakboy69
Your writing is improving spelling, grammar, dialogue. It would be nice to have a FEW multiple REAL partners REALLY fucking, watching, 3some, 4some, couples, all gentle, consenting adults. How about in laws?
-Betterwood on LIT
Really enjoying where you are taking your story. I'm also finding very realistic as it accurately mirrors various relationships in my own life.
I'm reading your stories on my laptop, which is right now doing a balancing act on my rock hard cock. I can't wait for chapter 3!! Very curious if the "dare" website is for real. If so, I would love to visit it.