by tenyari
great premise, well written, and shows class differenceds very well. Write more!
well written story and vision. something that ISNT 2 pages of plot and 15 chapeters of wandering filler. better than anything ive read on this site.love the characters,looking forward to seeing what happens next. keep up the good work
This old school slang was out of date long before this story was written. It was also written by someone who nerves used any of those terms. Story is good though.