by Zeenutt
Thank You for your story, for your writing ability. You could publish your stories in International porn magazines and earn money. Wonderful, mind blowing, thank you again for your story. ....Rahul from India
Loved the 2nd part of your story.
I am enjoying the pace of it too.
Not rushed at all.
Slow n easy does it.
You sure did leave me hanging for more.
I can just think of the possibilities with the pool.
I hope you continue it like this.
Teasing is all fine and good as long as it's part of a whole. Meaning yeah, she is teasing him, but now we need to wait 24hrs or more to hear more. Doesn't work well. If you want to do a tease, then do it as a whole story that includes the part they finally fuck or whatever. This teasing sections don't work for there is no pay off and you really don't have the reader on the edge of their seat for you are teasing, not turning them on.
Hey de story was superb n all i could imagine was tat it was my mom doing those stuffs 4 me. Hey if ne1 interested in roleplay mom n son. I'm 19 yr's old. jabbarlongdick@gmail.com. I noe de email address is bad. Please do contact. I love u mom
I love it i hope that the mom don't shave her pussy. I love a hairy pussy
I'm nor so sure about that. To me it seems best when a boy knows from the start that his mother's not wearing anything under her skirt or dress, that her mommy-hole is bare, uncovered, and open to the breeze. The boy'll picture his mother's cunt down there, under her skirt, and already get harder than he's ever been before, his cock'll practically bust out of his pants. And the boy'll sniff the air, testing for the wonderful musky scent wafting from his mother's warm wet twat to his nostrils, finding it and inhaling it deep into his young lungs. It's the best thing a son can ever smell, just like his mother's twat is the best thing a boy can ever see.
she is in the fucking shower and she know`s she is completely naked,,, what was her first clue
I love that mom gets wet thinking about her son. I can't wait til her boy gets to touch her
This story reads like a 14 year old wrote it. Very disappointing read since the story line could have been so enticing.
A young man can desire to touch, caress, kiss his mom's body so intensely that a mature man can still remember vividly thise moments and those days (and years). My infatuation with my mom's body was extremely intense and was reaching the deep of my psyche...
My family had a cabin by a rather secluded lake near the city where we lived. There i had the chance to see my mother not only in her bikinis but in her underwear too. There was a washer, but no dryer, in the cabin so we had clothes line were my mom would hang out whatever was washed. She would be in her panties and on top it was either a T shirt or a bra (seldom both); that was my favorite time of the day. In the summer i had my sunglasses on & i could ogle my own mother with no problems.
Zeenutt, this story is my cup of tea (& then some!)
I am looking forward to reading the rest of its Chapters.
You and your butts, and calling yourself Momma when your son calls you Mom. No wonder your kid did not
come home for four years, You sound mentally disabled and so does he.
I like the premise but there is a lot of nonsense. Why did he not come home for 4 years. There are flights to and from England every day. And her "butts" and Would you help Momma...? A normal adult talking to another adult would not use third-person baby talk. You make both characters sound mentally disabled.
Wonderful build up for a suspense full long sex story. The author can tease you beautifully before sex flows in gallons and sexy MILF and mother fucker have a great time. Can't wait to read next chapter