All Comments on 'Naked Portraits Pt. 03'

i think the story is amazing but I am sometime appalled at minor editing errors.

Thanks for the comment and sorry for the appalling editing.

that chapter was pretty stimulating. Editing would be good but the story line is hot anyway. Thanks.

Glad you liked part 3 ... and again sorry for the rough editing. Part three has the highest rating in the Naked Portraits series to date. Sine it's compiled of three scenes I'm never sure which scene people are responding to the most. My choice would be the lover swap with Emiko and Kira.

This is your reader from Oahu (Kailua). I cannot help myself, I am compelled to continue reading. You are a true artist, painting with words. Your tale carries me back to Oahu. One of the most peaceful places I have been in my travels was Byoda-in Temple. I did not have a chance to visit Maui-my loss. Whenever I have the time, I read, so please keep writing. Marine huntre.

I'm thousands of miles away from the islands and writing Gwen's twisted tail takes me home every time. Thanks for overlooking the glaring grammar errors and embarrassing typos. A public school education and declaring myself an art major is an ugly double whammy. Painting with words? I love that comment!