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Click hereJason was warm on top on the teenager, and his post coital feeling was better than most sex he had in his life. The slut beneath him began laughing, and he wondered why. Still in her asshole, he looked down at her, his expression question enough.
"The best part of this? The best part of taking that huge married dick and impregnating my teenaged cunt? The best part of fucking my young and big butt? The best part of doing this after an hour of knowing each other? Do you know what that best part is?" the nameless breeding slut asked over her shoulder.
Jason just looked at her in silence, confused as to what the answer might be. He couldn't imagine anything better than what had just happened.
"We get to tell your wife," Jason's nameless breeding slut happily grinned.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous4 months agoI enjoyed it! Not so much the over use of alliteration that sounds comical more than erotic. But it did the job.
Sucker4Boobies12 months agoThis story was AMAZING. Just the dialogue between Jason and the Breeding Slut was enough to get me hard. I look forward to reading more. This woman is a dream cum true!!
Anonymousabout 1 year agoOn one hand, I don’t think the concept of suspension of disbelief was even considered when writing this, but on the other hand, I got off when reading it so yeah. Not much to complain about.
Anonymousabout 1 year agoHilarious. I can't tell if hilariously good or hilariously bad yet. I guess it depends on if this writer thinks this is truly good writing, or is an actually good writer flouting the rules for parody's sake. Poe's Law strikes again. Progresses from the subtle to the ludicrious, but in fits and starts. Was initially arousing but soon I was laughing too much and sometimes derisively. Definitely broke suspension of disbelief at multiple points.
With practice this author could become a truly comedic sex writer, assuming that there is the self awareness necessary.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoThe hate shown anonymous comments is remarkable. Comments from the "evil anons" are at least 4 - 1 favorable which is equal to those with explicit screen names that allow complete identification. Names like "shadowforce1", "MrPervy", etc. Haha.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoDo yourself a favor and don’t go back into your prose and pump it up with wholesale addition of adjectives and adverbs which you haven’t thought out. Be cautious as well with haphazard metaphors that make no sense.
Vanescaover 2 years agoI am crazy about alliteration, and your story is stuffed with the most lurid , lewd, lustful, licentious, libidinous, lascivious, lubricious, lecherous salacious syntax seen yet in Literotica
Anonymousover 2 years agoPlease, please (a) ignore the discouragement of those who tell you to stop writing, and (b) write more and more and more. This was a beautiful piece of writing . . . . not just for an erotic genre, but for ANY form or content. Thank you for spending your time on this, and for sharing it with us. The blending of the big-boob and breeding fetishes was brilliant, and topping it off with the anal flavor was an amazing choice. In the hands of a lesser writer, it would have taken a hundred pages or more just to establish the basic premise. You are not simply a writer. You are a true artist. Again, thank you.
Rocky_Northover 2 years agoI...I should consider this ridiculous. The over-the-top body dimensions, the absurd, ABSURD amounts of alliteration in the dirty talk. But...I can't help it. I love this. I love everything about it. Will, except the anal, but that's just my preferences and nothing's perfect.
My kinks love the NBS and her breeding fetish, my sense of humor can't get over the amount of effort you (and the NBS in the midst of her pleasure) put into orgasmic screams that...good lord, how long did you spend coming up with alliterative terms for very large breasts? I... I can't help but applaud you, LHB.
Anonymousover 2 years agoThe entire series was just one big stroke story. It was ok, but could have been shorter.
