All Comments on 'Nan Made Him a Man at 18 Ch. 02'

What a raquet! All that free sex! He's my hero! hahaha

the prelude was great. I enjoyed the build up greatly. Your choice of words were just a little bit more than I would care to use.... Poop shoot, etc could be toned down slightly. The urinating in her mouth might have sounded better that peeing or pissing. But all things considered, it was easy to follow and it was enjoyable...... sounds as if you like to dwell on the anal sex more than any other form. When you were building up to putting your cock between her breasts and cumming in her mouth you almost completely skipped over it and I had hoped for a bit more in the methods she used to return the favours. She could have mounted you for example. Dont take this wrong. Each person has preferences and someday perhaps someone will write into a fantasy all of mine. lol