All Comments on 'Nancy's Delimma'

No real story just a preface

Are you kidding leaving the story like that? Page one was only the lead up to whatever sexual experience the two would have. On page two should have been Nancy reluctantly giving up the goods and enjoying herself (something like that.) Don't post half stories. It only annoys your readers who then wonder how they can get back the time they took to read your half story.

Finish this. First page is a great start.

It's in the head of the delighted reader!

"....... I got a phone call from Nancy." She informed me I was banned from the soup kitchen for sexual assault.