All Comments on 'Nat and Sandy Pay the Rent Ch. 01'

Really looking forward to the second installment.

An excellent beginning said the spider to the fly. You have left this open for so many possibilities without being brutal- at least not yet. But there is an underlying threat of malace waiting to happen.

This series is so hot! I need more of it, please! My pussy keeps cumming over and over to this!

I can't wait for the rest...............

I can't wait to read the rest. You have such a wicked talent for writing erotic scenes that completely throw caution to the wind. I love the way you weave danger and sexual tension together to form a truly twisted tale. One that has a climax of well scripted, really hot & dirty sex. Bravo! (I can only imagine what lies in store for poor Sandy at the hands of Gavin.) Off to read the rest! ;)