All Comments on 'Natalie Risks All'

I have to say I enjoyed that. Having an actual story line is great. Well done.

No only arousing, but clever and amusing (in a sexy way). Loved this story. Loved how you handled Natalie's thinking as she reacted to whatever was happening. The twists at the end of the story were perfect as they occurred one after the other. Please...Please...keep writing, write more, write harder, faster......puuuuuleeese.

The detailed seduction of her is very erotic - interesting twist using twins. I love the juxtaposition of their moral character with the undoubtedly male/dominating aspects of their characters.

The resolution is nice, but I wished that the conversation had a bit more subtlety.

Are there more adventures with our heroine and the twins coming?

What a shit :))

'Really excellent story' ??

-'' How Very Wonderfully Done' ??

For kids with raging hormones and 'Loved how you handled Natalie's "?? :)))

- Yaaapp.. Children are children.. :)))

This story does it for me every time.

This sicko should be locked up in an asylum for insane !