All Comments on 'Natalie's Back'

Damn best story ever I hope there's a second part I came like crazy with this one jajaja good job

Time and response is appreciated. I have to say, I haven't heard that in a writing class critique before. Thanks, keep reading.

Another enjoyable one as was your - The Birthday Girl series.

Cute story with a very hot premise. I really enjoyed the friendship between the girls and the high school history of the attendees sprinkled throughout. Def made it feel real and reminded me of various people from my own high school days, which made it easier to picture what was happening and feel what the girls must have felt.

Beautifully written! I liked how Natalie shed her inhibitions and exposed herself to her classmates.