All Comments on 'Naughty & Nice Sister & Niece'

by MrJack

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snakebytesnakebyteabout 15 years ago
Well done

Really hope you write more to this. I'd like to see what happens with all the three characters.USA

Dirty_Old_Man3Dirty_Old_Man3about 15 years ago
Great story!

I thoroughly enjoyed this story! I think that you should write another and include the night that they spend together, and maybe a third that tells about what happens after his sister returns from her date (perhaps during the night). Nice job!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
I liked it!

A very good job. I, too, would like to see further into their future. A lot of possibilities out there, let's see what you can do with them.

oldwayneoldwayneabout 15 years ago
Good tale!

A nice good-humored tale. Give us more!

southernbbwgalsouthernbbwgalalmost 15 years ago
awesome

very stimulating love the storyline and humor.. the sex is awesome

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
More, More!!!

Fantastic story, I loved reading this story. You should continue to write more of this story. Please post another chapter to this story soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Awesome

Loved the story mate it was bloody awesome.

I kinda guessed that April was his daughter when you first mentioned the birthmarks so that made it even hotter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
NICE

YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS STORY

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loved it all !!!!!!!!

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