by MrJack
Loved the story mate it was bloody awesome.
I kinda guessed that April was his daughter when you first mentioned the birthmarks so that made it even hotter!
Fantastic story, I loved reading this story. You should continue to write more of this story. Please post another chapter to this story soon.
very stimulating love the storyline and humor.. the sex is awesome
A very good job. I, too, would like to see further into their future. A lot of possibilities out there, let's see what you can do with them.
I thoroughly enjoyed this story! I think that you should write another and include the night that they spend together, and maybe a third that tells about what happens after his sister returns from her date (perhaps during the night). Nice job!
Really hope you write more to this. I'd like to see what happens with all the three characters.USA