All Comments on 'Naughty Marlene'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
what can gerry do?

i want gerry to fuck the lady who is cleaning their houses.she can be about 20 or 25 y old.and gerry can fuck marlene's old mom while she was having sex with mike and the other boy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Total crap.

LOL. Faithful wife turns slut because she had a baby. What planet is the author from?

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
fucked up stuff

Filled with absurdities hard to fantasize.Author should ask me for a good threesome story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Dumb

A big fat ZERO for stupidity.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
screw the alibi

i like the touch, wife is doing what she is, and the alibi is happliy w husband. he can throw wife out and not be worse off, better even.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
for the end

let wifey be ex, and her do, what and when for her. gerry has tessa, and the chance to get away from that wife

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Hm

Echh.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Why stay married?

You've got the lie, fuck her over by divorcing her right out. Who wants to own a used slut? Sorta like owning a junk car that you dont know if will start or not.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
What woman in her right mind goes out and stays ou

at night away from her husband and family? What woman that has had a baby wants to be fisted? He doesnt have a wife he has a nut case. And what man lets his wife run around drunk in the middle of the night, someone that obviously doesnt love her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
but end it

with the cheating bitch, and let her know her games was played better than she played it

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
THE END

he should have the locks changed by the am and have tess just stay over. a note may be left telling her to go back to tess', because she no longer lives there. as for the financial things, at least cancel the cards and deal with the rest in the am. fini

DWornockDWornockalmost 13 years ago
The threesome was okay

However, the story went too far in tearing her down so instead of 5 stars I stopped reading and rated it 1 star.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
No Logic?

Well duh. It got me hard. I would use both of them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
DWMoroncock is so stupid

She has Dan Quayle spell check her comments

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 10 years ago
Oh Yeah

As the saying goes, "One good turn deserves another."

I hate all cheaters.

AmbivalenceAmbivalencealmost 9 years ago
Oh, that was precious...

Would have been even better to find Marlene fucked way PAST the point she ever wanted, to the point she doesn't want that anymore...

Only to find out she then had nothing since hubby is with her alibi and prefers that.

carvohicarvohiover 8 years ago
Ha...

I read this years ago, but only gave it a three. It deserves a five.

Jedd Clampett

Just_WordsJust_Wordsalmost 5 years ago
I liked it!

I doubt he'll stay married longer than necessary. He's way ahead of that idiot wife. Glad she made it easy for him. Clever twist!

Rancher46Rancher46almost 3 years ago

What's good for the goose is good for the gander as the saying goes. Another chapter to finish the tale of Gerry kicking a pregnant Marlene out the door and replacing her with Tessa.

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Pretty good despite the cheating.

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