All Comments on 'Nebemakst Betrothed'

I really liked your well written story, I thought the storyline was different, and it explained itself well, I wasn't quite sure what he was going to cut off for a minute.

Good luck with your other work.

tartan9

I really like this variant. It's nice to see just how different a story with slightly changed elements "feels".

another excellent story by an excellent writer.