All Comments on 'Need'

by myalteregoisahedonist

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luvandluckluvandluckover 7 years ago

Nice job! Wish i were one of those women!

NC22371NC22371over 10 years ago
I need it too

Omg, that was way too short but so intense. Damn!

myalteregoisahedonistmyalteregoisahedonistover 11 years agoAuthor

Thanks for all the nice comments! I just submitted another story, so you should see that go up in a few days. I hope you enjoy it as much as this one!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Superb

Wow, Wow, Wow. Really well written. More please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

oh my god this made me really really wet like i wanted to cum all over. amazing story. very well written

deliciousthoughtsdeliciousthoughtsover 11 years ago
Oh fuck

unbelievably good. More please... much more :)

BahamaBahamaover 11 years ago
Damn

That made so wett , now I need to finish :)

Corpse_riderCorpse_riderover 11 years ago
Need more

A fantastic first submission. Great descriptive writing made for a powerful sex scene dripping with eroticism.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
about ''NEED''

Im a 22 yr old gay woman, I write as well, and THIS made me wett, good job n keep writing !

2275jr2275jrover 11 years ago
The taste of her open every wet pussy juices .

Need is right both her as well as your own . driving both of you to a big hard cumming love this your first story awesome story very erotic writing. love more of this kind of erotica Mmmmmmm love it. well worth a 5 .

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
very nice.

Please write more

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