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lovecraft68lovecraft68over 10 years ago
Good first effort

Well paced and not too harsh. A lot of stories that get posted in this category are more about abuse than BDSM, but this one is right on the mark.

I thought it was well written and sexy and loved the last line.

Keep writing!

LC68

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
perfect submission

Very well written holding my attention to the very end, what a great lil sub you are.

whipstitchwhipstitchover 10 years ago
Excellent!

Very well written! I thoroughly enjoyed it. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Sounds absolutely divine! Very nice story!

KobaKobaover 2 years ago

A very good story! Well written and very realistic.

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