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All Comments on 'Need, NO, Crave Sex'

by mtnman2003

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EmmSeaEmmSeaabout 16 years ago
Disjointed

Had potential, but disjointed and hard to follow.

Could do with editing and then re-submit. I think I would enjoy it then.

Emm Sea

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Shows power of craving

Author purposefully illustrates the lack of focus, his thoughts dominated by sex, where the next chance comes from, who the partner will be. No pretense, just sex.

Anonymous
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