All Comments on 'Neighborly Relations Pt. 04'

by R_D_Eddy

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
It kepps getting Better!!!!!!

I love these stories!!!!!! Now that I've learned to watch for the title and your name,I've been able to follow the whole plot! I can't wait to se how this progresses. Thanks for sharing your story!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
pay attention to the details

Several words not completed, several words misspelled, you need to pay attention to the details.

Whom ever is helping you edit your text needs to be smacked. If you did not enlist help in editing, then you should be smacked.

The people who write these stories need to realize that your audience consisting of more than the prison populations of each country, but actually have IQ's larger than their shoe size.

So pay attention and get it right.

bimsandy2003bimsandy2003almost 13 years ago
Running out of words

So sexy had me cumming thrice before i could finish the stories.

pervdoodpervdoodover 12 years ago
Hot as Hell ! !

I have to agree with annymous regarding the use of editors

However, a little more tact would not have been out of place.

smuuthiesmuuthieover 5 years ago
So twisted

Well written, lots of fun to read, I think Literotica needs a new category -“Fuckfest” can’t wait for the next chapter! I’m

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Where is part 3

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I have Part 3 if anyone needs it

OldGuy1946OldGuy1946over 1 year ago

To anonymous from a year ago Quote "I have Part 3 if anyone needs it" I would really appreciate reading chapter 3. You can contact me through this site.

iluvsecsiluvsecsabout 1 year ago

If anyone has chapter 3 I would appreciate it if I could get it. Thank you

KalimaxosKalimaxos11 months ago

What happened to part 03? I wouldn't mind reading that.

PS. I wrote a chapter of this. 09A and may write some more. This story is juicy as fuck.

If anyone has 03 and wants to share, hit me up by contacting me using the app on my profile.

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