by R_D_Eddy
I love these stories!!!!!! Now that I've learned to watch for the title and your name,I've been able to follow the whole plot! I can't wait to se how this progresses. Thanks for sharing your story!!!!
Several words not completed, several words misspelled, you need to pay attention to the details.
Whom ever is helping you edit your text needs to be smacked. If you did not enlist help in editing, then you should be smacked.
The people who write these stories need to realize that your audience consisting of more than the prison populations of each country, but actually have IQ's larger than their shoe size.
So pay attention and get it right.
So sexy had me cumming thrice before i could finish the stories.
I have to agree with annymous regarding the use of editors
However, a little more tact would not have been out of place.
Well written, lots of fun to read, I think Literotica needs a new category -“Fuckfest” can’t wait for the next chapter! I’m
To anonymous from a year ago Quote "I have Part 3 if anyone needs it" I would really appreciate reading chapter 3. You can contact me through this site.
What happened to part 03? I wouldn't mind reading that.
PS. I wrote a chapter of this. 09A and may write some more. This story is juicy as fuck.
If anyone has 03 and wants to share, hit me up by contacting me using the app on my profile.