All Comments on 'Neighborly Relations Pt. 08'

by R_D_Eddy

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Not a terribly big deal, but...

There are repeated references to Patty as "Terry" during the conversation between Robert and Charles.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Soooo....damn hot!!!!!!!!!

Damn!!!!!! keep it up!!!!!! Don't let this series end after BLOCK PARTY...there is so much more you could write!!!!!

Thanks for sharing this story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
this is Hot

his has a number of lines all going at the same time. I agree do not let this end at the block party. Perhaps the kids become involved with select neghibors etc. Great story line, good action and love the different parties involved.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
great warm up for the block party!!!

Keeps gettign better.. great job... i'm ready for the block party.. sure you won't disapoint

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
So many characters made a mess..

Too many characters confuse; also all permutations and combinations are indigestible.

GreenleafRGreenleafRover 10 years ago
Nicely done

I loved the Robert, Charles, Patty, Emily "let's try this first" gathering. Nicely done.

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