by R_D_Eddy
There are repeated references to Patty as "Terry" during the conversation between Robert and Charles.
Damn!!!!!! keep it up!!!!!! Don't let this series end after BLOCK PARTY...there is so much more you could write!!!!!
Thanks for sharing this story!
his has a number of lines all going at the same time. I agree do not let this end at the block party. Perhaps the kids become involved with select neghibors etc. Great story line, good action and love the different parties involved.
Keeps gettign better.. great job... i'm ready for the block party.. sure you won't disapoint
Too many characters confuse; also all permutations and combinations are indigestible.
I loved the Robert, Charles, Patty, Emily "let's try this first" gathering. Nicely done.