All Comments on 'Neighbors'

by just_like_water

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Excellent.

is this going to be a series? very well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Love It!

Please continue it! These two together are HOTT!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I agree

it's just_like_water, tasteless

hotcocoa6904hotcocoa6904over 15 years ago
Very good!

The sex was great and the bits of humor were an added bonus!! Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Hot!!!

Woah..too friggin hot!!!

mekakymekakyover 15 years ago
hot

hot story, hope there is more:)

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
nice

i feel a part two coming on....nice story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Will there be a part 2?

Interesting story...but why is she willing to be just one of his many? I would think she would want to be more than just that.

AssexAssexabout 15 years ago
YOU ARE TALENTED!!!

I absolutely LOVED your story, but two things keep it from 100%.

I thought the sex-talk was bit a cheesy at times and the end came too fast without real resolution.

That last bit is ARRRGHH, frustrating!!!

But seriously, keep at it, because everything else was beyond readable and enjoyable. Shoot, MUCH better than mine.

And I'm being real. :D

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
WOW!!!

PLEASE, continue the story. I want MORE!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Impressed

You're a wonderful writer. Best style I've seen on lit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Funny

A deaf old lady saying vajayjay bandit. I laughed.

I didn’t care for the ending, that she was willing to be another notch on his bedpost.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago
Occasionally, but unfortunately not enough, you know your with someone very special!

The sex is absolutely amazing and so fantastic that you really don't want it to ever end. The two of you become one so complete you know that you will always truly remember it the rest of your life!

Orpheum89

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Just more racist trash. Stupid and ugly.

Anonymous
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