All Comments on 'Neighbors'

The story was well written and certainly needs another part done.

Sounds like she has a plan...

1) Proof Read - or get someone to do it for you.

2) Turn on 'Spellcheck'! That will at least help with some of the spelling errors! However, it won't help with words that sound alike but are spelled differently. Remember, when reading, to mentally expand abbreviations to their long form. For instance 'they're' is 'they are', 'there' is a place, 'their' means it belongs to 'them'.

3) Go to 'Literotica Index'; 'Volunteer Editors' and ask for someone to help and guide you.

The story was good, the writing left some to be desired.

"I have no desire to be the cause of him to philander. I care about you guys too much for that."

Her being nude would not be the cause for him to cheat.

HIS inability to keep it in his pants just because she was nude would be the cause.

It's attitudes like hers that are used to justify rape - "He dress was so short/low-cut."

The way a woman is dressed (or not dressed, as in this case) may very well arouse urges in a man, HE has the responsibility to control those urges.

Thanks for sharing.

But could Cole really recognise it was Alice and not his wife without clothes on?

mechanical errors. Even if we can believe Cole did not recognize the difference between the two women's nude backs, it is beyond comprehension that he could not realize the differences as he applied the lotion or as Alice made "contented sounds."

Tim413

I don't know whether it's more amazing that somebody who imagines himself a writer doesn't know and doesn't care, or that he sometimes gets it right. In any case, as Leo might say, what's the deference?

at who liked and moved on, a bunch of losers.

It must be an unfortunate obsession that compels some readers to look for, and comment on, every little mistake in grammar, spelling etc rather than just enjoying stories like this for what it is--just a nice bit of pornographic fiction

Probably would have helped if there'd been a line or two about how near-sighted Cole left his glasses in the house with his clothes... It'd make a nice xxx-rated Mr. Magoo cartoon though...

Some people have an obsession to make stupid comments on every fucking story.

Dumb Fag.

I presume by "stupid comments" you were actually commenting on William smyth, since that's the only one who has made any stupid comments, primarilyi since most of this bozo's comments were about others and not the story.

Congratulations!!!!

Continue it soon ;)

For the read.

But there should be more to their story. A Couple having sex can't help but to start having feelings and Jennifer might find out she likes to Watch.

Take a shower, give back robe, and..........??? Was wifey supposed to ask him to nail her friend at this point?