by neil96nz
Good story about healthy sexual desires within a willing relationship. I hope as a reader you don't fall into the habit that is commonly seen on this site where the couple becomes self destructive and abusive. One where the husband suddenly becomes a wimp and the wife humiliates and degrades him. Many on this site seem to think this erotic and acceptable behaviour. Continue the story and you will probably develop a readers favorite.
Thanks for the feedback ... hoping to certainly add to it and not intending to degrade of abuse any characters!!
Thanks for a story of consensual, gentle, open and honest LOVE! Very well written and i look forward to more!
Wonderful writing and I hope for future stories.