All Comments on 'Nell's Gift'

it made for a nice read..

could've like if there was something more about the magical city and other person's magical gifts... Just for detailing, you know.

Still, good one.

Good intrigue, H_Green, so I hope you will follow through and further develop the characters. And the writing looked good, too, not filled with distracting errors in grammar, punctuation, and syntax. Keep going!