by EbonyKitty
Too many real life stories end like this. Some try to find happiness and are successful, others aren't as lucky and remain hopelessly in love with their first. Your readers (especially this one) desperately need a happy ending. Please write a sequel.
This story of goodbye is breathe taking and I would love to know what happens. Do they get back together, does he go to London to bring him back?? Please, please continue this story.
Wow! Great story and well deserved for the friend. He needs his own happiness and life.
I am just sitting and reading and crying. this story is my exact same life :( plz give me more. i hope they reunite.
Would love to know what happens...reminds me of the fairy tales we hear "And they lived happily ever after". But what happens after?....
Hope you write more...
wow! u cant let it end this way! pls do another chapter and let them have a happy ending
Just found this story, and am disappointed that you haven't written any more.
Your dialogue was spot on, and the sensual scenes were totally believable.
Please reconsider and write more stories.......
you know i'm really close to tears right now... this story is awesome and i hope you'll write a sequel ^^
No fairytail. This story is Life at most wrenching. Love just doesn't always flow in the same direction and many times it just hurts. You painted that for us here. Can't wait to see the next chapter. Will the wedding happen, is London permanent? Thank You
It is very hard to leave someone you love even knowing it's the best thing to do. You wish the marriage wouldn't take place and he goes to London. Sometimes life is the pits. Keep writing, but how about happier endings?!!
and heart wrenching, it's a wonderful story. i hope you continue writing