All Comments on 'New Class Rules'

by alcalavicci

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Stupid...

...and moronic. No build up, no steam...it sucked.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Fair

It is a good story once you get past all of the wrong word usage and misspellings.

I would like to see more of your work but please have someone proof read it first.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Unbelievable

This Story was so unreal at least the others made some sense no one is ever gonna teach that

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
O deer

2 4 efort - c wot I mene?

It would have been a fun little piece, if you had proof read it, first.

Lukas

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
what a waste !

Pointless story and pointless idea never I have read such a wasteful use of a good idea

Wolf of Mibu 69Wolf of Mibu 69about 19 years ago
Needed touch-up

You had a classic hook that's always interesting... the nympho sex-ed teacher. You even did the sex fairly well, but your grammar and spelling were horrid. You need to proof-read your stuff. I gave you a 4 because it was good, but with that little extra effort, it could've been great.

forever2nightforever2nightalmost 14 years ago
Wow...

Very nice! Real turn on. Hope to see more like it :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
grin

grin

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