All Comments on 'New Day Dawning'

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live4thebjlive4thebjalmost 10 years ago
Same story different author

Read this premise many times over whether it is mom and son or other members of the family. For that I found it redundant. 3stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

All i can say is well done Very well done

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Amazing

Not too much into the whole father-daughter thing, but that was well written, and was paced beautifully. That user who commented about it being redundant obviously needs their eyes checked.

HornyKipHornyKipalmost 3 years ago

This story was hot and we'll written. Is there more on this pair?

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