All Comments on 'New Horizons Ch. 07'

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Randee2058Randee2058almost 7 years ago
INSENSITIVE

Why writer would you have your key character show no physical sensitivity for Danni when she cried out not once but twice during anal penetration. What you displayed during that was a lack of concern for her friend. Yet a burning need to achieve her own satisfaction. If you thinking I'm wrong reread it yourself. I'm otherwise enjoying the series but let's do a better job with keeping the key character true too her personality.

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